Wednesday, 12 November 2014

A poem on politicians who are corrupt

Spotted Deer

Threshold after threshold  
Ricocheted back;
A bound pact ; a solemn vow
Scaffolding repeatedly-
A treacherous fact

Sharp senses ,
Humiliating humours,
A well described-
Tricky treasurer

Half a decade-
A lasting eternity
or so it would seem;
Lured in by the sane
To this very day!
 

Why do you do this society? We are not birds in a cage!!!!!

Due to...

The meaning of life?
To study , succeed and multiply?
A simple fraction beyond,
The day of the castaway would have dawned..
Rendering a soul helpless
In an adventure that is hapless

Seeds are we,
planted in pedantic rows
Fools are we,
to bear fruits for the farmer
Shrewd is he , 
for the tool does he possess,
To sculpt us and corrupt us,
With heartless thoughts to spare.

Hopeful of the seeds to come
To turn it all around
We wait for that day to come,
But now- A tree have i become! 

Tuesday, 22 July 2014

My critical appreciation on 'The Pike'


A critical appreciation of 'The Pike'

"Pike , three inches long, perfect" is the short line from the poem 'The Pike' written by Ted Hughes that strikes you when you read it.The poet is referring to a fish named pike and he even tells you how small it is."Pike in all parts, green tigering the gold" this is a somewhat illogical line but on further analysis ,"tigering" could mean that the poet is referring to the stripes of a tiger and showing that similarity with comparison to that of the pike."Killers from the egg : the malevolent aged grin" - this line shows that from the first word, the poet starts to build up tension in the reader.He uses words like killers , malevolent and grin to make the pike seem scary.

In the third stanza , the line "Gloom of their stillness" invokes mystery in the mind of the reader.The poet refers to the pikes' teeth as jaws in the line-"The jaws' hooked clamp and fangs ". These words in the line show exaggeration and also he again refers to to words like -"jaws , hooked clamp and fangs" as proof of his exaggeration.From this point , the readers' mind is immediately diverted to that of something big and scary.

Then comes a small story in the middle, fit into one stanza , about three pikes kept in a tank (all three of sizes increasing by half).Then immediately comes the line, "Suddenly there were two.Finally one." which shows that they viscously attacked and killed each other until one remained.What would one pike do?The poet is trying to exaggerate the viciousness of the pike again in increased levels.In another line "Indeed they spare nobody" makes the reader think that the prey of the pike is extended to the wider world......FUNNY-Don't you think the fish just got bigger and that its description exceeds the capabilities of a three inch fish?He starts to now describe the pike in his own way.After all , what is the purpose of a writer?To educate of course.

The line "One jammed past its gills down the others gullet"again proves his exaggeration of how dangerous the pike really is."A pond I fished , fifty years across",-starting from this line , the poet has shifted his setting from a fish tank to a small pond.In the coming lines , he slowly increases the size of the pond ( bigger and deeper as well) with the line - "Stilled legendary depth:""It was as deep as England".The word England is being used there as the country England represents itself with deep history, so the poet cleverly uses that depth in association to what he wants to represent of how deep it actually is."Pike too immense to stir , so immense and old"-just have a look where the three - inch fish has ended up!"The past nightfall I dared not cast" - this line makes the reader feel as if he is present with the writer-which starts to get the reader scared.

The poet explains how scared he was- naturally scaring the reader too.In the rest of the poem , he explains how scared he is to fish in a pond where the pike resides.

To conclude all this , the pike is a poem which leaves the reader scared of  the pike soon after reading it .It shows the poet's ability to make the reader believe his exaggerations.You know when you are fooled when after reading the poem , you turn back and see the first line again-"Pike , three inches long , perfect".

Saturday, 7 June 2014

How to grow and nurture a hero inside you

                                  How heroes are born

It starts with an act,
An act of kindness
Followed by humility,
In return for gratitude

To share and to give
To forgive and live
To think in your mind
Of what is right

This act needs no enormity
It can be as simple;
As lending a hand
Not something grand

To not judge ,but be judged
To not love , to be loved
Marks the birth inside of you
The birth of a hero


Thursday, 5 June 2014

The Importance of being Earnest-types of humour

                            Importance of being Earnest

  In the IGCSE examinations , The Importance of being Earnest - a comedy which contains a lot of humour types. reading and including these can easily fetch those hard to get marks. 
      

 Types of humour

1.Witticism
2.Ridicule
3.Sarcasm
4.Wordplay
5.Unconventional attitude(like hairstyle)
6.situational comedy
7.retorts
8.irony
9.paradox
10.verbal brilliance
11.loss of pride


How to write a haiku easy

                                Haiku explained easily

You might think that writing a haiku can be pretty tough .....but when you know how to write one, you will  be so deeply engrossed that you keep experimenting.
  The most basic rules are:
  1.It's only three lines 
  2. The first line should only have 5 syllables
  3. The second line should have only 7 syllables
  4. The last line should have only 5 syllables

These steps can get you writing haikus' in no time.However there is a lot more to Haikus'.
Like : choosing a subject 
          using seasonal references 
          using sensory language
          subject shifts 
  But as I give one example you will understand better
            Over the wintry
            forests, winds howl in rage
            with no leaves to blow

simple just try making your haikus like this 
well writing a  haiku is an art which can only be developed through practise.
so please post some of your experimental haikus . 


                                                         thank you


IGCSE students alert....... How to write an article. Notes from my teacher

                                 Magazine Article Structure

1. Topic

   Introduce the issue , which may be something topical and in the news , or research recently published, or      proposal which has been put forward by a government or other agency , or the description of the person      that the article will concern,Unlike a news report, which is informative and a speech which is argumentative     , a magazine article is discursive writing.

2. Background

   The article is likely to fill in the past history of the person or event which the article has been written and        what has led to the current state of affairs.

3.Discussion

  The article is likely to return to return to the present day situation at this point  , discussing and giving             different viewpoints of the person or event , with details and examples and quotations , and making               comparisons with the past or with similar topics.Though the writers; own viewpoint may be inferred ,             alternative views must be given equal weight and other voices heard.

4.Prediction

   At this point the article may deal with the future developments or predicted outcome of the present                situation ,E.G.-that a person will go on to become even more famous and successful , or that a current          predicament will become worse if nothing is done about it , or which side will win the political debate

5. Conclusion

    The article needs a neat conclusion , which may be an ironic reference back to the beginning of the article       or a quotation.


We all wish to succeed in life .... so do i......tried interestingly to combine with diwali

             My life is but a failed cracker, waiting to explode

Dreaming is one thing,
Doing is another
We wish to deliver in life 
With a punch or a bang

I know I have wronged
I know I have sinned
As I buy the cracker,
It reflects me - the whole action of it
What a spendthrift I am
And what a time waster

I feel that people do not know,
How good it is to be lazy
We steady the cracker - looks perfect
As we wait for it to burst

But no-I say I don't like it
But there is nothing else I can do
And no again - for when I raised my expectations,
I felt back stabbed - it failed on me!

A lesson from the cracker was all I needed ,
To remind me that it reflects myself
But I am really sure that once I'm calm,
I will come up with a bang!
Not now , not tomorrow,
But soon enough!

A reminder of how powerful words are!

                                      Curse them Words

Spoken are words ; from a blasphemous person
And spoken from him ; actions put into effect
To torture , to kill , to destroy
Oh how words have changed humanity
How people give in to them

To not show the devils inside 
Are words said
To breathe them in and live accordingly
To give and take pain ; A sin
A promise to remember
And never to uphold

There was a choice though ; most people never see
But when in desperation,
These words had to be followed!
To turn events around - impossible
When the deed is done
And everyone is responsible

Those who had to live with it, 
Are now dead
Those who served , met with the same fate
Even though these words can still have value,
An unwanted value,
We have a choice -they never thought they had

Let us move forward
And change many hearts
With words only of love , passion and honour.

Just a simple take on my views of life .....expressed into poetry

                                         Caught in Life

Lose , losing , lost
Words which are unbearable,
Words being pressed ....
To the chests of those who fight,
A possibility which wins over victory

They know not of what they do
As they pull the trigger,
They know not of what will happen,
As they become blinded with fury

The cowards are the ones who do something right
The ones who hide-
In a dark , deep trench,
Not getting caught in the crossfire
They are the ones who really fight,
Against a fight

Shedding tears mean nothing
When the day ends,
And they realize the damage

I lay down my arms and walk.
Walking opposite the war
And as I look far beyond , kicking a stone away,
I realize.....This is life ,
And I cannot run away

                              BY  R.VINAYAK  MADHU  MENON